Sir Walter Raleigh to Queen Elizabeth
To Queen Elizabeth Sir Walter Raleigh
Our passions are most like to floods and streams,
The shallow murmur, but the deep are dumb;
[JSA1]So, when affections yield discourse[JSA2], it seems
The bottom is but shallow whence they come.
They that are rich in words must needs
discover
That they are poor in that which makes a
lover.
[JSA3][JSA4]
Wrong not, dear empress of my heart,
The merit of true passion
With thinking that he feels no smart[JSA5]
That sues[JSA6] for no compassion;
[JSA7]
Since, if my plaints[JSA8] serve not to prove
The conquest of your beauty,
[JSA9][JSA10]They come not from defect of love
But from excess of duty.
[JSA11]For knowing that I sue to serve
A saint of such perfection
As all desire, yet none deserve,
A place in her affection,
[JSA12]I rather choose to want1 [JSA13]relief
Than venture the revealing[JSA14];
When glory recommends the grief,
Despair distrusts the healing
Thus those desires that aim too high
For any mortal lover,
When reason cannot make them die
Discretion doth them cover.
[JSA15]Yet, when discretion doth bereave
The plaints that they should utter,
Then your discretion may perceive
That silence is a suitor.
[JSA16]
Silence in love bewrays more woe
Than words, though ne'er so witty;
[JSA17]A beggar that is dumb, you know,
Deserveth double pity.
[JSA18]Then misconceive not, dearest heart,
My true though secret passion;
[JSA19]He smarteth most that hides his smart
And sues for no compassion.
[JSA1]Intense passion is silent; shallow passion is “noisy”
[JSA2]Discourse = verbalization
[JSA3]People can talk a lot about how much they love each other, but when it comes down to it they don’t have a deep relationship
[JSA5]Pain
[JSA6]To ask for
[JSA7]Just because I don’t make it known, doesn’t mean that I have intense feelings for you
[JSA8]complaint
[JSA9]Don’t let my lack of complaints make you think that I don’t love you
[JSA11]He does not see her often because he is serving her
[JSA12]No one deserves to love someone as great as you.
[JSA13]Lack
[JSA14]He would rather suffer in silence than cheapen his love for her by complaining or asking her to show signs of love for him.
[JSA15]He knows he’s aiming too high, but cannot control himself so is forced to be discreet.
[JSA16]I am silent because of discretion, but take that as a sign of my love.
[JSA17]Silence shows more than even witty words can how sad he is at being apart from her.
[JSA18]Metaphor: He is the beggar because he is needy for love – he is in love with someone that is beyond his reach.
[JSA19]Don’t get the wrong idea about my true love for you, though it is silent

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