Wednesday, September 21, 2005

Sir Walter Raleigh to Queen Elizabeth

To Queen Elizabeth Sir Walter Raleigh

Our passions are most like to floods and streams,

The shallow murmur, but the deep are dumb;

[JSA1] So, when affections yield discourse[JSA2] , it seems

The bottom is but shallow whence they come.

They that are rich in words must needs

discover

That they are poor in that which makes a

lover.

[JSA3] [JSA4] Wrong not, dear empress of my heart,

The merit of true passion

With thinking that he feels no smart[JSA5]

That sues[JSA6] for no compassion;

[JSA7] Since, if my plaints[JSA8] serve not to prove

The conquest of your beauty,

[JSA9] [JSA10] They come not from defect of love

But from excess of duty.

[JSA11] For knowing that I sue to serve

A saint of such perfection

As all desire, yet none deserve,

A place in her affection,

[JSA12] I rather choose to want1 [JSA13] relief

Than venture the revealing[JSA14] ;

When glory recommends the grief,

Despair distrusts the healing

Thus those desires that aim too high

For any mortal lover,

When reason cannot make them die

Discretion doth them cover.

[JSA15] Yet, when discretion doth bereave

The plaints that they should utter,

Then your discretion may perceive

That silence is a suitor.

[JSA16] Silence in love bewrays more woe

Than words, though ne'er so witty;

[JSA17] A beggar that is dumb, you know,

Deserveth double pity.

[JSA18] Then misconceive not, dearest heart,

My true though secret passion;

[JSA19] He smarteth most that hides his smart

And sues for no compassion.


[JSA1]Intense passion is silent; shallow passion is “noisy”

[JSA2]Discourse = verbalization

[JSA3]People can talk a lot about how much they love each other, but when it comes down to it they don’t have a deep relationship

[JSA4]Love not being expressed

[JSA5]Pain

[JSA6]To ask for

[JSA7]Just because I don’t make it known, doesn’t mean that I have intense feelings for you

[JSA8]complaint

[JSA9]Don’t let my lack of complaints make you think that I don’t love you

[JSA11]He does not see her often because he is serving her

[JSA12]No one deserves to love someone as great as you.

[JSA13]Lack

[JSA14]He would rather suffer in silence than cheapen his love for her by complaining or asking her to show signs of love for him.

[JSA15]He knows he’s aiming too high, but cannot control himself so is forced to be discreet.

[JSA16]I am silent because of discretion, but take that as a sign of my love.

[JSA17]Silence shows more than even witty words can how sad he is at being apart from her.

[JSA18]Metaphor: He is the beggar because he is needy for love – he is in love with someone that is beyond his reach.

[JSA19]Don’t get the wrong idea about my true love for you, though it is silent

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